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Chocolate Banana Pancakes

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my first pancakes from scratch for breakfast that I made for my family. I was pleasantly surprised they turned out well. Not too sweet & not too rich :D
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

this shot has a lot going for it:

The contrast of the pancakes to the back ground allows the to stand out, but so too does the contrast of the apple slices on the top of the stack allow the viewer to quickly notice the attention to detail that went into making the meal. The line of the pancake edges grab the eye, and move the viewer across the image from top left to bottom right, and if the viewer should look top right first, the line from the apple slices lead you to the edge of the pancake, and again allow the user's eye to move across the image. What is missing is syrup, or some sort of sauce.

Now the fact that I mention the sauce isn't actually just to be funny, or out of some personal preference. If you had a syrup. the line cause by the dripping along the side, would connect the line of the apple slices to the pancake edges more easily, and if the drippings were to extend to different edges, you could create an effect that kept the viewer on the image for a longer period of time.

Overall, a very nice image that make me very hungry.